Great!

I like the manga-ish drawing style. It's a bit colorless, but the animation is smooth and simple and the plot is amusing as well. Overal good stuff, keep it up!

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not bad 1

it was okay... good efforts for a first animation too.
may i suggest that you have a look at some tutorials here on NG... they will be able to help you out with your future flashwork. also, have a look through the audio portal for your music too.
good luck.... i look forward to seeing more flash from you.

decent but...still needs work

it looks like amuetuer flash

Cool

The graphics weren't really a style that I like, but they were still pretty descent. The music was good, thank god you didn't put the lyrics to that song in this flash as well or it would have ruined the whole thing. The story was pretty good, a litte hard to follow at some times. Overall this was a pretty nice flash.

WOW

I really like this style of animation, black and white sketchy.
like the guy said before me, with a little practise, your animation would be excellent! almost anime, i can see the drawings were in the style of manga, but for them to be anime you have to animate properly, there was nothing wrong with it but try to neaten up.

10/10
and 5 votes!