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Hmmm well it was ok but needs much more then what you have there, just too little and too
large in file for the content, also the topic matter was abit iffy, just not enough time
went into this, better luck next time...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well make it longer, and more humor more jokes, just something to make the viewers intersted in it...
It lacks detail time and effort, but is a start in the right direction, keep at it...