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"Hey Harriet, its me graig, how's the new house? Hows the kid's? Ill bring the stuff over later ok, i miss you, cya later, love u lots"

My work is improving and soon ill be finished the full version with better graphics and more compressed sound files.... the credits will be put in but seeing as im learning i just thought id give a taster of whats to come.

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((( NEEDS A STOP-ACTION CODE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well as your first its ok but has some issues such as it loops meaning your "RE-PLAY" button doesnt work which also tells me that you need to add a stop actio code in the script, anyways as for the flash it was ok, needs work on the art and animating more detail and more effort...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could add a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...

~~OVERALL~~
Abit sloppy, but you get the idea of it, also needs some fixing aswell as better detail...

~X~

Boogey-freak

Hey, the boogeyman! With music. In color!

Well...

It waspretty random. But it kinda freaked me out..if that was the intention, then good job, i suppose.

That was really creepy and scary

But sometimes I like creepy and scary, the animation looked cool. Maybe make a longer version of this. Good job.

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Uploaded
Oct 7, 2005
5:49 PM EDT