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^^Good Points^^
Some of the drawings weren't too bad. I liked how you drew the different hairs. That's a tough thing to draw, but you did it well. I also like how you separated the clothing into types.
^^Needs Improving^^
Filesize is way too big, and definitely not worth that crappy music. Compress the music, or better yet, just take it out altogether. The music off button doesn't work on the credits page. This wasn't really interesting because it's just an unnamed Joe Schmoe, which can be fun, but you didn't really provide enough comical items to make it funny.