nice
great effort, and love your choice of song!
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Update: Thanks for not blamming!
I liked the song and thought I would make a little flash for it. Please give me constructive critism as I want to improve in flash. What else can I say but vote fairly please. Thanks!
((( GOOD ART AND FUNNY HUMOR )))
Haha this was ok, i liked the simple art and good use of colors, the backround was very bland, add some backrounds and it improves it greatly, you have some great music behind the simple flash, but that was ok, anyways nice job on this short flash with some ok humor but better art so nice job....
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Creepy o_O
You seem to be okay at drawing, bu the animations are basic. Also, make sure to complete the drawings, some of them looked unfinished. I really liked it. The song fit beautifully, and storyline, though creepy, was pretty creative.
cool
if you select a body of fill on flash, there should be a little button where the tool options are which is a curved line with some arrows pointing to it, if you press that any number of times it smooths the edges of the fill. dunno if I explained that well... also try using the line tool more for smooth outlines. just keep practicing and study good flashes, maybe do some tutorials, and you will get better. you seem to be pretty good at drawing and not bad at animating...
Dee-McC responds:
Thanks for the advice, I will do that for my next flash.
Pretty good for your first flash
Is he a cyclops? It never shows more than one eye at a time on the main character and when he's walking sideways it looks like it sticks out. Nice submission though, doubt it will be blammed.
Dee-McC responds:
No hes nocyclops but thats a pretty funny observation. Thanks for the review.