10/10

Simply THE dopest line I've ever heard before "Like shootin for the roof at the firing range, you never made much sense and aint a damn thing changed" That right there my friends, is lyrical gold!

flash was okay....

flash was okay but once I figured out that you made your own video (as opposed to using someone else's song) I focused mostly on the rap and not the flash...

For sound you get an 8 because you got the rhythm and you can certainly flow... but for style you get a 3 cuz quite frankly... gibberjabber... I was a huge Ice-T fan also, he was one of my key teen influences, but all Ice-T did was talk shit about how it's cool to be a gangster... he was full of shit. Public Enemy approached issues (and Chuck D still does today), they were political, they were aware of social issues and had a higher morality than what religion, government or education feeds to us.

This is where you're lacking... "I'm so cool" hip-hop has got to go, it's as useless as "I'm so horny" disco. Coolness becomes a fad, intelligence becomes immortal.

I hate rap also, like Shinigumijr

But despite my hatred for rap, i will rate this fairly...

The graphics were quite good, the lyrics were nice.
Nice beat, and good idea for a song. Arguing over there being nothing to talk about. Thumbs up, "Homie"! ( hehe i said homie :P )

Hot Lyrics, son.

I really enjoyed it. Yea your artistics skillz arent good. But the music made up for it.

ok

based on you comments I thought the graphics were going to be bad but they were alright. they do need a little more work but they was good. the rest of the flash was good as well. 3/5 final grade