I had to make an animation for my year 11 Multimedia project. This is my first attempt at a Flash animation, so be gentle, critisism welcome. Thankyou for taking the time to reply and watch. Enjoy :)
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~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, hope you got the grade you were looking for, it could use more effort even little things here and there wouldnt hurt, mostly some more effects
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effects and more details all around it will improve greatly...
~~OVERALL~~
A fun class flash but seemed to be abit more then that, nice work...
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ok
not too bad... or good. very random animation, but your efforts were good and also good to see people who are learning flash in school/college and taking time to submit their work on here.
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ummm...the story made no sense...at all, but good for a first animation.
Good first try
Laughed out loud when i saw the guy typing at the keyboard which caused a few heads to turn. Little hard to hear the voices. Good first try. Next time try drawing characters/models etc on paper first, scan them in and trace over in flash.
Not bad for round one with Flash
The sound was good and the message behind the story was excellent. you have a lot of potential. Keep at it.
And ignore Broba. People who can't spell shouldn't be harsh critics. Especially on a first-timer.
