Umm
I didn't want to review but everytime I saw one of these in the Portal I had the urge to comment, but didn't thinking it was no big deal and you wouldn't make to many anyway but you didn't stop so here I am.
Anyway what I want to bring to your attention is
Redapple (clock) is not a original character I'm afraid. He was actually a real person on NG who wanted to be a clock a long time ago but was regected for being a dumbass so he went and made some lame anti-clock movies and then disapeared.
search authors for Redapple to see.
But I understand that you believe this is your original character since the actual AppleClock is GREEN I just don't understand why you just didn't use him instead! :(
There are so many Clocks it's just wierd that you would make a series about a character that no one is, atleast to my knowledge anyway.
Well, you are getting better Klop even your English, a little bit. However this RedappleClock series just confuses the hell out of me. Hope you don't mind me saying. Peace.