After reading the great feed back on my first submission (both good and bad). I really went through what everyone said about my first submission and tried to put your advice to work...Thank you again, for taking the time for the reviews on my first submission. I think it helped allot to make this (My second flash animation) better than the first.
Second movie, Second review!
I really do think Im gonna enjoy following your flash development. You seem to have the quality of Flash down but it's just your punchlines. I wanted to laugh but I just couldn't. Perhaps sound could benifit you and voice actors. You may wanna try your hand at more serious movies. I hope my second review to you helps and I really wanna see more of your works.
not bad
a fairly random animation, but it was good overall.
Thank you
how do u people come up with this stuff?!?!?!
Well it was pretty pointless flash.
did you have a bad day at school, bullies picking on you again? I think sombody needs a hug..LOL Thanks for he review. very helpful.
loved the music went well the the subtitles
it was ok then the toilet thing freaked me out just a bit
Thank you sorry for freaking you out a bit:)
lol
Although it had a slow start, i found it really funny. And true! But the whole Toilet thing freaked me out a little....But still a cool flash, just make the text dissapear a little faster. ;D
I will work on the speed and pace overall. I see now how slow it was, thank you for the reivew. Its really helpful.