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Kazahana FMB: Servant 02

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Nanse here!!!
Those that visit lifepoint1 might already seen this but, I decided to submmit this to NG, so if you haven't please do see it. This is the second flash submission featured in Anime Section of Kazahana. Part 3 is featured at Lifepoint1 without voices
-Nanse explains his destiny of protecting the shrine, while the real invaders show themselves...
-I originally submitted it without voices, but this one includes voices.
-This isn't the best of all flash, since i did it in 5 days, but any comment is accepeted.
- FLASH ARTISTS!!! If interested in making a submission please visit the Rules section of Kazahana at www.lifepoint1.com. I also do manga and art for the page, so if you do too you can contribute to it.
-BTW!!! MUSICIANS!!! There is also a music section, but there's only 1 song which is the theme song of one of the characters if interested visit the page too!!

Reviews


Pretty good....

Good job!

The style definately reminds me of Xin(Maybe because you mentioned Lifepoint1?)...

The only thing I ask of you to improve on is the subtitles...

Don't use the equal sign, use a colon.



its ok...

its a bit ok... but try to improve on more moves or combos



needs work.

this is confusing. its so hard to follow. plus the mouths and the words dont even match up half the time. you guys need to seriously work on this. you also make your characters talk too fast. slow down the conversations. you should also try numbering the episodes so people know what episode theyre watching. it seems like you guys just rushed through this. try to take more time on them.


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13,463
Votes
1,036
Score
3.98 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 17, 2005
11:50 AM EDT
Genre
Drama
Tags
  • Daily 3rd Place August 18, 2005