just a few problems
this is prety good for a first flash , u might want to add some basckground music and make it a bit longer
Author Comments
This is my first Flash movie. So i thought about a message to give to other people by flash. This is my message.
ZETA responds:
Yeah, thnx for the tips.
Im working on something else now, may become a series.
P.S Il add background music in my future movies.
what?
Despite the fact this is an Agaisnt War Flash, its still not very good. Your message isn't clear, the animation is slow and simple and its jsut not much.
ZETA responds:
My message isn't claer? Should i buy you a 50" Plasma screen so that you can read? STOP WAR SAVE LIVES
Against Bad Movies.....
says i.
-ruthless
ZETA responds:
Ruthless? It's a message. Not an announcment.
Ok it not it but.....
It's not physically cool too see but I like the message and the form. The movie is very short, 3 simple phases (map, bomb, stop the war message) so with better graphs it could be a good example of a good ad to pass on tv (or on the web). Because the clip takes us directly to the point... So good luck on improving the graphs and keep on improving your good pattern building!!!
ZETA responds:
On TV? No, i don't think so...
But i apresheate your help and tips.
P.S It was made to take the viewers to the point, that's why the message is simple.
hmm
since this is ur first flash im gunna protect this and give it 5/5. gave u a higher score thanx to the message aswell
ZETA responds:
Thanks for protecting me. ^^