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^^Good Points^^
I guess there is a wide quantity of subjects that you've covered in here. Not very good coverage though. Points for having a DDR song though.
^^Needs Improving^^
First thing I noticed was how you butchered a fairly good song with terrible audio quality. More importantly though, the information you provided didn't seem to be very helpful. Nothing you said was really exact and descriptive. Doesn't look like you really have much knowledge about these subjects.