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Damn dbz is done with not originsl the only thing i liked was the graphic u used for fireballs

so-so

try harder.

Huh??

I don't know what expression this movie gave me, I am just pretty blank in my mind about what to say...

At least you have chosen a good fitting song to the movie! It gave it an exciting atmosphere.

I don't know if you were joking when you colored the characters attack beams. You took the gradient filling that it so worn out my old raggy jeans just started to look better. And it looked horrible too. Please learn when to use gradient fillings! It is one of the most annoying things there is if it is used wrong. Watch "Lambi" series to get a little hang of when to use the gradient fillings.

There are other graphical things you should have kept in mind. I saw a white line at the bottom of the screen which means the movies size is a little slipped. And I didn't like the speach bubbles. One had white background to it, other were just black text out in the open with a line from it to the character. That was just messy, chose one type of speach bubble and stick to it. And I'd say it would be nicer if they were cleaner, easier to read.

Also you have made the people sitting in the restaurant transparent. Which means you can see that their limbs are connected since it shines through. It would have been better if you just laid a transparent light blue object on top of them if you wanted them to look faded by the window. Or tinted them slightly white. But otherwise that is a plus for living backgrounds!!!

Don't get mad at me if I say this movie is one of the easier types of animations. Since it is easy FBF'ing. By that I say that it was way short and that this serie really doesn't have to be a serie but a bigger movie instead. I think you want more movies than one big one. I can understand that, who wouldnt?

The FBF animating was ok. The characters bodies were like if they were blumps of ink splashed out on the screen. I liked it though! Nice style to that, that is the only reason you get anything in Style, otherwise, its stickmen fighting, and we all know that is old. Vote: 3

3/5 material

That was awsome! Nice work!

Really Good!!!

Sticks are sweet, but did you get this idea from DBZ??? like the sword the lazer beams all that, good job though really good.