it wasnt that terrible
needs to be way longer. and why did it sound like there were so many people in that bank if it was at night. banks close at like 5. get real.
Author Comments
sorry this was so short but the 2nd one will be off the chain, and oh, yea, for some of u who might wonder why the wheels keeep spinning when he stops, they are called spinners a.k.a. spreewells
i did all the voice acting by myself, itwas my first time actually
enjoy! :D
((( GREAT )))
This was very good and shows lots of effort, like the very well designed car, and the different scenes, decent "VOICES" aswell the story was good and plays out well, maybe chabge the sticks with real characters though something other then sticks, nice job though...
~X~
It had potential
but then it ended up being really short and without really any action, work on it a bit longer before sending it in
Hey
It was ok, maybe you could help me? I`d like something like that but with more like gangsters and not a bank. Maybe we can chat?
sandra
THAT SUCKED HOMIE!
THAT WAS BAD YOUR VOICE TRYING TO ACT ALL HARDCORE UR NOTHIN THAT SUCKED MAN! P.S. I LIKE A SHOUT OUT TO ALL
MY BOI IN EAST BRIGHTON PEACE
dat-boi-Monk responds:
r u a faggot or someting "yea, i'd ;like to give a shout out to my boi" nigga u ain't hard fo real fo real, where is ur flash?? hmm, u fuckin suck, so maybe u needd to just shut te fuck up "wutangkillabeez" u sound like a fuckin wanna bee