Liked it... kinda
First of all, I must say it's very brave to try to translate Lord of the Flies into Flash. On that note, it's also very difficult. The fact that you started at Chapter 8 didn't help a lot of people who haven't read the book. All the facial expressions were unchanging, which I admit is a bitch to do in Flash but is something that needed to be done with such a story. The other boys besides Ralph, Jack, Piggy and whats-his-name all had similar hair. That was only a tiny bit annoying, though. Also, every single scene had just a bit too much blank space at the end of it, it got kind of annoying waiting for a scene change. OVERALL: your style is good and you have good ideas, but Lord of the Flies is waaay too big for just 5 megs.