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pencil meets paper pt. 1

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This a flash i worked hard on and hopefully it doesn't get blammed!

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Nice

I liked this a lot. Its been favouritised

Better than most say it is.

This is a good flash, but you could have used a better colour scheme. That pinkish colour was horrendous.

september0018 responds:

sori, its just that i'm a pink fan!!!

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Everyone seems to be judging you based on all of the more "professional" flash makers that are around. But everyone can't just start out and be so good, it takes practice and stuff, and although alot of people may not agree with the music, you'll never be able to please everyone, go with what you like. Overall I think you did good, and it was creative in my opinion... keep at it!

september0018 responds:

Thank you soo much! (*tear)

it was pretty random but very creative......

i'll give you an A for effort man... but try harder....

Sorry

Terriable sorry but ive seen much better flash in my days. I know ya' worked hard on it son, but ya' gotta' try harder in the future. Remember that practice makes perfect. Good luck in the future.

september0018 responds:

um..me a gurl..why'd you call me son?

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Votes
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Score
2.94 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 25, 2005
10:15 PM EDT