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Goobit Refuge

May 20, 2005 –
December 5, 2022
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

My first time using actionscript and my first serious attempt at flash.

Reviews

((( HMMMM )))

Well notbad, and when i say this i know i said it a bazillion times but the file size needs to come down, mainly for us 56k users and there are tons of us out ther, needs more orginizing and stuff, and needs to be abit faster, seems really slow, it was fun to play though, i even played it twice, so it did have a nice replay value, just needs abit of work, music was cool and art work was so-so but could also be better...

~X~

<deleted> responds:

Yeah, I didn't stream any of the music, so that probably contributed to the huge filesize.
"BAD PUDDLE!"
I'm sorry,it was one of my first Flashes, I didn't know...
Please don't hurt me...

meh...

this is a tough game... the concept is alright.. but there needs to be a way in which the rabbit dude can be moved faster than that... everything that's thrown at him is going way faster than him... the music is alright and graphics are okay... but it seems that this game just needs to be fixed up a little bit more.

<deleted> responds:

I know it needs to be fixed up more, I know...

hey

hey good job man....even thou its kinda hard 4 me ...so keep tryin

<deleted> responds:

I'll keep trying, but with a slightly different concept each time. Part Two will proabably be a multi-game-type game, so it will have a part thats similar to this, but fixed up, and a lot of other, different and diverse levels.

misunderstood

everyone who tyhinks this is bad is because ur to much of a dumass to beat it, maybe you should all learn not how to suck, then come back and vote again, fags

<deleted> responds:

Well... ok, thanks for the support I guess? Wait did you actually attempt to beat this game? Thats cool then.

I think you need some more practice

Well, ain't bad for your first flash, but I can't really say that I like it. Not that it was that bad, but there were some annoying things about this game.

First of all, the bunny moves very slow or the needles move to fast. It was impossible to avoid being hit sometimes. Maybe you should add a powerup so that the bunny moves faster or something that make the time go slower and the needles go slower as well. Second, I would choose some different music if I were you, I think the current music was a bit boring. Third, the whole screen turned red when I was hit, that was probably the most annoying thing of them all. At some moments I couldn't see a damn thing, please remove this. Fourth, the bunny kept getting bigger, because of this, it was even harder to avoid the needles.

Well the best thing about this game was probably the graphics, they were pretty good.

Anyway, overall I'd give this 5 out of 10, 2 out of 5. Like I said, it wasn't really that bad for one of your first submissions, but I think you need some more practice. I'm not really interested in the next parts, but good luck with making them anyway.

~Auz

PS: Sorry if this review sounds a bit discouraging.

<deleted> responds:

Wow, thats a lot of constructive criticism! Thanks for the help. I'll try to fix most if not all of these things in Part Two.
Oh, and by the way, don't worry about discouraging me. I don't have any self esteem anyway. <(-_-)>

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