Ok
Keep trying...It's not bad
Author Comments
I made this for my friend's skate film. It's a short piece, and all the sounds and music are from FlashKit. The skeleton kid is copyright of Blind Skate Industires. Please leave a review and tell me what you thought of it.
not bad
its not really detailed good but its good for a newb flash,the grim reaper was really nicely drawn and funny,decent job ^_^
Kickflip159 responds:
OMFG This from the "genius" behind Beast Boi!?!?!? I will kill you, you smelly, sucky snot! STFU, you n00b
Sincerely,
Flip
needs some work.
its a good idea and all and it was reasonably well executed, but a bit of tweaking needed.
first off, the dude's face just looked weird with all those cross lines over his face, i dont really think they were needed.
when he's doing the slide, his feet are too close together both when you're looking at him sideways and front on, doesnt look like he's on the edge of the board.
also, he was on the front of that truck for a bit long, and you could have made him drop a bit quicker. but all in all it was entertaining.
(THE THUMB: UP)
Kickflip159 responds:
About the truck: Because of its speed, he stayed on the front.
?
That was alright but the truck was unneccessary it should have been longer. Next time try and do something else not just a skate movie. Something with a story line prehaps! No doubt you have animating talent you just need to harnes it! Good job deserves to stay in!!
Kickflip159 responds:
It wasn't a truck, it was a van, that's why it was short. (Yet it made a truck-horn noise...)
Pretty cool actually.
I liked the charachters and the movement was good but you need some work on your backrounds and other objects. The truck for example. Otherwise cool.
Kickflip159 responds:
Thanks for the comment. I'll try to make more involving plots.
Credits & Info
- Views
- 2,597
- Votes
- 7
- Score
-
3.96 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- May 4, 2005
- 12:31 PM EDT