OMG ONCE AGAIN
LIKE PROJECT DAYLIGHT 2 ONLY 3 PEOPLE DIED?
WOULDENT THERE BE LIKE 50 OR MORE IF HES IMPORTANT!?
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My First Ever Flash. The story goes;
Project Daylight was created by the president and joint chiefs to accomodate missions where typical team efforts by military SpecWar is not called for and a single operative is best suited for the job and outside of the military jurisdiction. This shows the reactivation of the sole living operative and introduces two elements in the story to be elaborated on in later episodes. One, who the female is in the picture, and two, why he is the only one left. Although the fact he is the only agent left is not revealed in this, you are presented with the fact that the project itself was closed and is now just being reactivated but you do not know why.
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too slow, i got bored from the start
the music didn't fit in well
if ur going to have the movements slow, use music with a slower pace
bad choice of music i reckon
the guns were nice, movements were smooth
daylight9 responds:
You are right as were the others. Very slow and the music should have been slower or the animation faster. I am working on a new episode and spending much more time making this one move and not let up. The next one I promise will be much better.
well...
needs refining, you could do better.
Nice job.
You could do without some of those pauses and certain ones shorten. I understand the whole dramatic effect element, but you didn't need to zoom in that close on the picture and hold. And he walked very slowly. Some people with little patience would have even got to the movie from what happens in the beginning. Other than that it was good. The music choices were great, and the graphics flowed well. Nice little plot. I hope this does well and I look forward to your next project. Until then, take care.
daylight9 responds:
I took your advice and shortened some parts with long pauses. I but I dont want to up and post the newest version and break any rules.
A good start!
I really liked the guns in this. The animation was very smooth. The only problem was there wasn't very many sound effects. And the movie moved VERY slowly. Perhaps you will make it faster when there isn't any action going on. I hope you make more.
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