dull

no sound. wtf is with the teletubbies???? michael madsen reference?? the graphics sucked, but u did attempt some depth in their faces, it wasn't totally two demensional. boring... the penis guy? ....what?

It really needs some sound.

If you want to go with a silent animation try a different style. It Is a great begining. You might just want to work over the story line a little more. And shorten some of the dead spots.

heres alittle math for ya, logic equation

given: if a flash = shit, then the producer = shit

this flash = shit
therefore,

YOU=SHIT ^ ^have a nice day biatch

ok

not bad, a bit random, but i liked your efforts.

not too bad

well, the graphics werent pro, but they were admirable in their own way. not everyone has to be a pro to make interesting flash. the music choice was wise...when there was music..and the beloved penis guy was flippin hillarious!
all in all i think you will develope into a pro flash artist.
keep up the good work!