How Could You?
How could you stop on just one episode? This plot already has me involved in these characters and wanting to see where this goes for them. I don't know quite what genre this was meant to be, but once again, the story is what's keeping me interested. You should consider brushing up on your writing as well to write a screenplay or something, or pitch an animation you've made to become an official series. The music was also a standout portion of this animation. Aspect of the animation could use some work to be of a more professional quality, but I'm not complaining. The characters look cool and you've clearly got a certain style. Loved it. Good job. MAKE MORE!!