Bad looping
If the music looped properly and the Graphics, for example, the Backrounds, were better i think in the long run would make you produce better flashes.
I'm not picking on you or anything, but, please, the music...
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Hi guys. This is my first flash animation....sorta. Last night I submitted it and people said it was too short and pointless, so it got blammed. So today i decided I would make it better, so i reworked some things, lengthed it greatly(when he starts rubbing his head is where the toon stopped last time). Hope you guys like it!
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sorry, i submitted a file that had a similar filename, whooops. This is the real one, so blam the other one if you wish. Later
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should have made not so shitty of an end, it makes me sad to see it just stop like that out of nowhere. i hope you plan to add more and not make a second one, because if i have to watch 2 animations to see how a fight between a cute frog? man thing and a rock turns out, i just might bome your house with my mini-nuke
Well
it was pretty bad that one guy topher is his name? had nothing but a smile on his face even when he got hit, and he is vs. a rock? whats up with that anyhow the graphics were not to good. So maybe next time maybe inprove on the graphics and story (if there is one).
tobergdads responds:
You're looking at it wrong, that isnt his mouth. I know it looks kinda curved, but the characters in this toon wont have mouths that are always seen. What you think his mouth to be is his jaw line going up to his neck. I guess i could eleviate this problem by removing the neck, i mean...he doesnt have arms or legs.... Yeah, i'll probably update it tomorrow with facial animations and maybe eyebrows, he kinda looks wierd with them on. Thanks for suggesting what I need to do. Oh and him fighting a rock, well, it is just obscurity. Origionally he was just going to chuck the rock in the air and kill a bird ala Duck Hunt, but i changed it to be...uh...more..better. Later
Cute
I don't care what others think because I like it and I'm glad you fixed it from before when it had no sound. Keep it up!
tobergdads responds:
:D Thanks! Yeah, it was pretty bad without the sound huh?
see? that only took you a day!! haha.
you pretty much doubled this movie's length in one day, so imagine how good you'll eventually get at flash. i enjoyed watching this, mainly because of the graphics and the sound effects.
there was a good level of detail in the backgrounds and Topher, and you used heaps of sound effects along with a couple of very good music loops from flashkit. well done on your first flash dude, im sure the next part will be great.
6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)
tobergdads responds:
Thanks a bunch. I really appriciate it. I had a lot of fun making this, and my next one is hopefully going to be better. I learned alot in just two days. I'm writing a story board for my next as we speak. I really like that song though, if there was a long version it would be awesome. Thanks again, later.
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