In chapter 2, we go back in time 3 weeks, to when Aki meets zaryne in Aki's home town.
Boring.
There is no action, and those people block me from actually viewing your movie. Next time, or whatever, you should not have the people who are talking cover the screen. Make them appear on the bottom.
The sprites are cool (if I could see 'em) and the story wasn't bad. Needed a lot more action in my opinion though.
Anyway, see what you can do in the next episode, and keep up the good work.
wow that was very boring...
i really didnt enjoy this because nothing happened. all of the animation was very simplistic, and the graphics were mostly sprites...
also, the helicopter scene was lame beyond anything else... utterly crap.
get better text, animate more, and draw more backgrounds and characters.
4/10
(THE THUMB: down)
I am thinking about puting this series on hold, well i get better at sprites. right now im working on a FF7 sprite flash, yes i know its over done, and so I dont know if I will bother posting it on NG. but yes, i agree i need to get alot better at sprites before i continue...
ok, not bad
would work so much better with voiceovers, but its ok
it may, but then i would need voice actors. and since im a nobody its hard to find good voice actors. and bad voice actors are worse then text.
This is okay!
Good job here. Unlike the guy earlier I think that the text boxes go by at just the right speed. Your drawings of the characters in the foreground were good. I'm not into these type of movies but I thought for what you were trying to do, you did it well. Keep up the good work!
not bad.
The story line was pretty good. Make the amount of time each peice of text is on the screen longer and you have almost cracked it.
thank you. how much longer do they need to be? 2 seconds? 10 seconds?
