I'm sorry but......No

That was not very good at all.....The drawings were bad and the sound and grammar was awful.

It looks like you spent some time on the graphics, then sped through the rest of the work as fast as humanly possible.

You should really put some more time and effort into the next one you make.

Uuhhhhhh....

If you're not going to use voice acting, at least use a dictionary...in some of those scenes I couldn't figure out what the characters were trying to say. Also, its not neccesary to say fuck right off...start with hell and work your way up to it. Fuck is the big one, so you don't jsut want to leap right into it or you will turn people off the story. So far the story looks as though it could be interesting, but the other hinderences hold it back.

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it was ok except tat bald guy looks like gordon freeman bald, like wtf!?!

Eh......

First off, rate your movies correctly. Use of swear words(aka 'fuck') is not appropriate for all audiances.
Now, the movie itself was ok. Him picking up the sword out of nowhere was kinda dumb. When the dude was looking in the hole and got killed or w/e happened to him, I wasn't too clear on what was going on. Basicly, make it more obvious as to what's going on.

book man

if i wanted to read i would gett a book..and even if there was sound..the story blows