Graphics, that's it.

Short sums it up. Try making it longer, adding sound, a story, then submit it to newgrounds. Otherwise just keep it in a private archive for you to admire.

what the heck?

So you make yerself look big an important by sticking 3 pretty logos on the front of a film for the first 30 seconds, for 10 seconds of... a car driving away from a building, then looping back to the start?

Did you realise that you submitted somthing that blatently wasnt finished?

Hmm..

The movie starts out looking pretty good, but things go downhill from their. Needs music and sound. If you actualy wanted to make this into a movie you should add a fast car scene. I gaurentee that would raise the rating alot.

pretty need

it was nice but it could use some sound though

*twitch*

no sound, , made no sense, a boxer in a car? justa horrible try... sorry