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this is the prelude to my final fantasy series that I'm working on, enjoy



f'in awesome dude keep it up ^

SquareHard responds:

hehe, thx for the support

I like...

But take a black rectangular graphic symbol, drop the opacity to like 30 something percent, and slap it under all the white narrative text so it doesn't blend in so much. It was hard to read ze story in contrast to the backgrounds. Good stuff, though!

SquareHard responds:

yea, ill do that for next time, but in the next one, there really wont be too much narrative, most of it will be chatting and fighting, hehe, thx for the review



SquareHard responds:


It could be interesting.

I don't agree with TwinsenDude. Sprites can be great, IMO.

I'm looking forward to seeing what you're going to do with the storyline, and how the characters are going to play out. Yes, it was a little slow, but it was a prelude, so I forgive you for that.

The only thing that I kinda had a problem with was your backgrounds. It looked like you took a screenshot of it and saved it as a .JPEG file. I use .BMP, .GIF, or .PNG so they don't get distorted. Also, they weren't in correct proportion to the characters . I could live with it, but... meh.
Well, good luck with your series. I'll keep an eye out for it. :P

SquareHard responds:

o shoot, ill remember to save the file as one of those files next time, im still very new to flash, so i didnt know thats why its doing that, lol, thx for review

Needs to move fasters...

Ok graphics, but they need some work.

The sound is great, but should be a bit more dynamic. Basically the whole thing just needs to move a bit faster... people don't need 20 seconds to read each card.

Btw, Terra and Locke? Yeah, all the sexual tension in the game was between Celes and Locke. Terra didnt even factor into any kind of romance.

SquareHard responds:

hehe, keep following the series, ull see wat happens :) thx for the review

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Oct 31, 2004
9:28 PM EST
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