Well...
As the creator of the All-In-One Tutorial series I would like to say that you did a good job, but it's to basic. There aren't many topics, and people don't seem to like pure txt tutorials :) Add some more graphics and some pretty neat graphic FX and you'll have yourself a 3 or higher scoring submission :)
Conclusion: This is a nice basic tutorial, for the total flash n00bs... But it's a little bit 2 basic... Add some more advanced topics the next time :)
Greetz,
Hypocritism