alright so this is my first movie for newgrounds, I'm planning 2 make at least 10 acts (If I have the patients and stuff like that, and if you like it ofcorse), or maybe more. Maybe there are some faults in the english, sorry for that(I'm dutch thats why:-O:P). Well, I hope you like it so I can make some more of em, because this is only the beginning;):P
peace
ducth people are gansgter!
english:
yo i am dutch to dutch people are the best!
the movie is not bad but i heard episode 3 is much cooler.
looking forward to see the other to!
nederlands:
yo ik ben ook nederlands nederlandse mensen zijn het beste!
het filmpje was niet slecht maar ik hoorde dat deel 3 veel cooler is.
ik kijk ernaar uit om de andere te zien!
Really good work! Especially for a dutch person!
I 'am dutch too, very nice to see another dutch person on Newgrounds that can make a good movie.
The black and white graphics gave it a nice touch.
I think you could work better on your sound, the sound in the training part was a bit repetitive.
You used too much rhythms i think, if you use more normal instruments like guitars, piano's and maybe some electronical instruments it should be much better.
You could make the music for the training part also much better, if you use fast tones and a bit more electronic guitars.
But don't use too much claps, drums and snares.
There was much violence, with the father that was shot.
The figure that shot his father is interesting,
you could do alot with that character.
You have made only a play button like most people.
There wasn't humor in your movie, but your movie is more about the action.
Keep making this movies and it will become much better everytime.
I can advice you to make for example, the guy that shot his father have assistents that the main character have to defeat.
At that way you could make a complexer story line and you could put more action, and better weapons in it.
Hope you find this review helpful!
I 'am looking forward to your next episodes. ;)
A bit cliched
The storyline is totally cliched.
However, it's presented fairly nicely. Seeing the beginning from the child's perspective is a nice touch and I like the limited use of colours.
Shaking is done nicely, the walk towards the camera has nice arm movement and the animation in general if fairly decent.
His training seems to be over quickly and all that seems to be left is the final confrontation.
I suppose I'd rather that was the case than it dragged on though. It did have a fairly nippy pace.
One point - you may want to fade in/out loops instead of having them end so abruptly in future. Use a custom edit.
OMFG! ANGEL!!
w00t! angel music! that got you a 10 rite away!
Not bad
it was cool but the only thing was... the storyline. i've seen the same story line over and over and over and over and over!!!! but it was a cool flash, lookin forward to the rest of em!