Better.
This was better than the first one, but the animation could still use some work. The animals in the background moved to stiffly and unrealistic. The fight was still kind of boring too, I think due to lack of movement.
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I have updated fire and snow adding more animation, less eventless gaps and a fight scene between fire and snow check it out and tell me what u think,
this update took a solid days work , if you wanna see what has been updated check out V1.1 first
**read first**
Well my last flash, fire and snow was blammed , but had some helpful comments, anyway i have remade it but a bit better this time, it is still not too good, but this is only my first proper film, up til now i have only made flash that could be used in banners, it quite short, depending of the results i get from this animation i may make a longer version and spend more than two days on it. ** Fire and snow are two magical creatures one of them, fire has fire powers and the other, snow has snow powers. All drawing and animation was done by me over two days, which is why it didnt come out to well, the story line was created as i went along but everything seems to fit. The majority of sfx came from these sites http://members.tripod.com/ushk/sounds/sounds.html http://www.media-tracks.com/default.asp?ID=5 http://www.partnersinrhyme.com/soundfx/Ambience.shtml http://www.geocities.com/cinnabar_red/sounds.html http://www.3dcafe.com/asp/soundssoundeffects1.asp Music:Rammstein - Feuer frei I will respond , if not blammed before, to any useful comments, abusive or pointless comments will be ignored
Chris
Frank-Uselesschris responds:
and lack of action, problem was my characters were too complicated build up of 7 or 8 layers each, i really need to redrawn each frame, but with so many layers thats a big job
okay
it was a little bit slow, especially in the fight scene. haha... rammstein... german rock music
Frank-Uselesschris responds:
:P i need to redo the fight scene, well i wouldn't even call it a fight scene
Sweet
Ok I have some suggestions for you. Please work on a Replay button. Also when Fire and Snowy jump off the ground at each other was probably the weakest looking part. If you cleaned that up it would help. Speed it up some. That sums it up.
Don't get me wrong, I thought you did this real good, I'm just trying to help.
Frank-Uselesschris responds:
s'ok critisms are gd, even the very best movie can be improved, ill will have a go over the fight scene but not resub just change the file
Pretty Good
i liked ur animation it was drawn good but the it was too slow apart from that it was kool
Frank-Uselesschris responds:
thnx, this was only my first moive i've been working on getting better timing
WTF?????
only thing i have to say is WTF?????
Frank-Uselesschris responds:
whats ur problem?