Not your best, but still good.
...just as the title says.
this is just the intro...
That was great. loved it. i can help you out if you want.
That is pretty awsome for your first flash, I wanna see the real thing!
I really wouldn't call this an intro due to the length of the flash but it was something that was pretty damn cool and well made,good job.
For a intro...
I have one thing to say. Good work. Keep it up. (Okay, that was 2 things...)