nemmy is faggot lol
looks good
it looks good but it's to short to make a good evaluation about the the humor because they say almoust nothing. But the graphix loos good.
I gess all you need to do is spend some more time on it and find something that wil make people laugh.
hey good job but...
your voices sucked, too quiet and low quality... i can do voice acting and it doesn't cost money...
if you means that i have a crap voice or something i'm sorry to offend you. I realise they are low quality and there for we will work on that however for now the preview will remain with the poor voices because i don't care enough to change them.
damnit
I really was hoping for a Trailer Park Boys spoof.
sorry just took the names from that utterly outstanding show trailer park boys
Needs work
Not a bad submission, really, but and old wendy's ad comes to mind.
"Where's the beef?"
"Where's the goddamned beef!"
Awright, I made that last bit up. Still, it needs something to float. Everything in here was either a Matrix rip (old) or window dressing. Or Salad Dressing, if you want to follow the hamburger analogy. Also, the sound on the diologue segment (the one bit in this entire submission that showed the slightest promise of "meatiness" sucked, to put it bluntly. I heard something about a video game... and that's it. Yay.
All in all, the piece shows promise, but it doesn't actually pay back on that promise. Long story short, I voted to blam it, just so you hopefully come back some day with something more interesting.
Nothing personal.
thanks for the review even if it was harsh. This is only a preview of things to come. the matrix heme is there as a joke to through people off what the actual animation is going to be about. Sorry it didn't have too much 'meat' but i don't wanna give to much away. i hate when reviews do that. this way you won't be expecting so much when the actual animation comes out.
Looks Pretty Good
Your trailer for your movie looks very well done, short, but well done lol. All i suggest is that u change the names, cuz it sounds like your taking the TPB's names. if you don't know what TPB stands for, then, this was just a very big coinencidence(sp?) lol. (TPB = Trailer Park Boys)
I know and love that show trailer park boys and it was not a coincidence. We just couldn't think of any good names and i think that we'll probably make the names better later. and koudos to you i think its takes a great person to watch such a great show as trailer park boys