This is my first Flash video. I plan to follow it up with 2 more chapters to complete the story. Please give me any feedback you have. Thanks. Oh and I fixed that "Jack Flash" thing. Thanks to Mikey_The_Godfather I have avoided a possible legal fiasco.
Good Continuity
Congratulations! I can tell you're trying to develop a story here rather than just going for shock value like some of the others do. Pacing was pretty good and the action was well done. Some parts could use some more dynamics/speed but it was enjoyable. Great job!
A decent effort
Nice start; could use some polish. I'll watch later chapters, I'm sure.
Wha?
It seemed like so much of it was done with care and precision. Other parts looked half assed. Aren't missiles supposed to explode? Anyway, overall it was pretty good.
Not at all bad for a first effort
Your art and animation still needs work, but you've managed to do a lot with the limited resources available to you and created something that looks very good, given the fairly basic graphics. I enjoyed this, and I'm looking forward to your next installment. Keep working to improve and I think you have the ability to become a really good flash animator. Nice one dude!
Your preloader says "NG ROCKS"
But you must've been snorting rocks when you made this crap!...either try harder or keep this crap comming cause i think everyone can use the balm points!
