whoaa!

i really liked it! its funny , cool , great characters! i liked the way you drew that!

good drawings but...

you did very well on the drawings, but everything else kinda sucked. i liked the guy that pointed out everything. he was pretty random. work on the story line a little bit.

well, at least it's not sticks.

Very well drawn with a pencil. Perhaps, next time, use some "color." The story is original, it was creative and you deserve a descent score for this.

I commend thee for thou needeth commendment

Bloody awesome. :-P Great choice for music, again (in referance to "ink")And now that I read that last review and think about it, it -is- hilarious how you fit all those anime parodies in there :-D Whole thing's awesome, and shows you're not as deep and intellectual as "ink" makes you seem...this is a good thing. :-3 (i guess O.o;; )
Looking forward to more of your work.

-Ivy

Yup

That was fantastic.

Beside the good drawing, great music, and hilarity it's making fun of the horrible aspects in those action anime series floating around. Can anyone say Rurouni Kenshin?