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It is nice to see that you are trying something different in a two parter for one plot. I am definately interested in the next episode. Will the officer wrongly arrest Atena as well? What about Cletus the Fetus? I think these episodes are starting to loose a little steam - it is a good idea to keep them shorter, as they previously tended to trail on a bit. How far can a series go under the guise of the exploits of a talking Fetus? Introducing new characters into the series is definately something that can help bring some new blood into these episodes, so you are on the right track.
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