This is well done for a begginer's flash
I'm not a flash maker myself, but i generally see alot of first submissions from other people and, no word of a lie, your is better than 70% of them. If you continue to evolve by starting at this stage, you have a good hobby or career ahead of you if you get serious about it. don't listen to the random couple of douchebags a couple of review pages back who say your flash is crap, because while it's not the best it's a good stepping stone. I think at some point i may try flashing after seeing alot of these submissions, it looks like fun, but keep going man, you have great potential.