wtf?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
for the effort.
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This ones a peice about a time in my life where i just gave up on life for 2 years...I figured it was somthing worth wirting about..i'm shure everyone has gone through a period like this in there lives thats is simmilar...so sit back and enjoy..and plz tell me what you think..and not i'm not going for pitty as much as it seems lol..
emo?
I don't know man... I did like the integration of the real backgrounds with the flash animation, but given there is no true explanation of the emotion, then it becomes kind of pointless...
And believe me, I respect the emotion of feeling dead in life, been there, it ain't fun, but see, when I wrote about it I always explained the source of the emotion. The thing done, the event that triggered it, the unmistakable mistake done. It is what differentiates a deep writing and/or film, from something that just seems whiny and kinda pointless...
Sorry if I offend, I don't mean to. I trully mean this as constructive criticism. Audio quality could improve too.
It's a good start.
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This movie is too emo
Pretty awful.
The song was alright, but bad audio quality. So bad I thought it was something you recorded yourself, which I was about to give you props on until I saw the song credits on the page. The typed passages were whiny, needless, and spelled poorly in many cases. The character was your average, prototypical emo-kid. The animation was pretty bad and the integration of grainy, real pictures was an ugly sight.
I don't try to seem offensive, but this isn't a good flash.
Kinda emo but...
I know the feeling, but why use such an emo looking character