Nice first-time!

very nice for a first 3d but sometimes, especially near the beginning, it was hard to tell where the streets were because of the lighting. Now, were they supposed to be cars, or random cubes? :-)

Nice Attempt!

That was a good first shot at 3D'ness! A couple of downfalls were the lighting at certain times and the sound effects made me feel like i was playin a gameboy game(which doesn't suit your graphics).
Also at certain moments from certain angles the gutters looked small (about 1/10 of the vehicles, if not, less) and at other times the gutters were almost as tall as the vehicles. Also your vehicles were always driving over the gutters and not being effected, which made no sense when the camera changed and the gutters looked huge!
I know this was your first attempt and all... but with a little more effort you could achieve a 10! cheers

Great work

Nice animation and all, but I kinda think that the only thing that'd make it better, considering it has no basic structure, would be a circling zoom-in ending. It just seems like the kind of thing that'd end in a decreasing circle. Good work though.

I'm not a gentle person

This was completely basic, it was pointless and entirely mundane.

Deliverence music? WTF?

Maybe use objects that aren't entirely possible to recreate in Microsoft Paint.