I have been making claymation more latly. I got an A when I showed my video teacher my claymation movies. he says im accually improving. Thanks for watching. Tell me what you think also.
I can see that you put nearly zero effort into this judging by the clock in the background! Stupid music, terrible animation, weird ass fight, and why was the toy missing an arm?! No story at all!
How the hell did you get a freaking A on this series? This is one of the worst series i have seen on this site!!!!!!!! Your teacher freaking sucks.
-2000 out of 5 stars!!!
WHAT!!!!!
Try using a stop motion program to make these movies. they would look a lot better and you would get better reviews. Try using anasazi.
here are some tips:
First off, make at least 3+ photos with stop motion in every action. Example: A blob waves its hand, make 1 shot when its bairly moved, #2 move it a lil more, and so on.
That my friend, is stop motion animating.
Next, is to make the FPS 15. That is what Knox, Freemont, and other great clay animators use.
Next, be sure to take time and effort on animations, at least 5+ hours. If you take your time, believe me, your effort will show through
What was I just forced to watch?
I have no idea what was going on the entire time. (which wasn't very long.) Everything happened to fast. The viewers aren't going anywhere, so slow things down a bit. I'm not telling you to quit, cuz I'm sure the guy that made "Gumby" wasn't any better than you when he started.
Your teacher is full of shit
this claymation needs alot of work. Im going to try to be as nice as i can about this but here it goes
1.too short
2.more detailed characters
3.needs to be less "jerky" when animated
4.Needs to be longer
5.needs different music
6.character designs NEED improvment
7.Try again
