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Expriment 01 :Clip:

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This is just a clip of my up coming production, Experiment 01.

I may make one or two more of these to give an idea of what the actual seriese is about.

Review please! I need to know what to improve on.

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Not too shabby.

i would suggest adding sound efects. The music was ok, but its not enough by itself.
Also, when the cyborg dude fires his laser, its too slow.
Otherwise verry good

Nice one

All hail teh sugar king! Its me, Gaz, you know me :) Nice, i liked the detail on the half metal guy's face, but the punching/hitting needs more realism, a higher level of movement to increase the potential of this good animation. Well played, and i hope to speak to you soon :)

i liked the 3d effect

its pretty good, only it would be more fun if you would have made the music yourself.
If you want you can use mune 2 :>

Some Good Art,Good Music,Crap Story,Crap Finish

It started off good, but it ended crap, the ending was terrible, the close up of the cyborg guy was good, all other art sucked... You have the skills but you need to use them!

plz review he said... ok

most annoying:
radial

I advise you to stop makingn sticks and draw real characters. The metal part was a good start. Oh yes, add fx too. Hmm, I think you need to put more effort in the movies... I saw that you have some skills... but I'm sure you are not yet using them to the fullest.

2/5

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Uploaded
Jan 11, 2004
12:55 AM EST