great for a 1st

great for a first, tis a shame mine wernt that good as i jsut found out "THE HANDRAIL" got blammed!!!

its k

not my type, but a fairly good effort was seen. also it was a bit short, mae your next flash a bit longer and try sound/music from the audio portal.

((( SPRITE ACTION )))

Cool sprite action, but it was really short, i like the backrounds, and it started out real cool, just kinda short, notbad work though keep it up....

MOVIE COMMENTARY: Short, but crisp...

~X~

Nice for a first flash

That was good for a first flash, no real storyline, and the lightsaber sound didn't really fit the sword sound. I think you should make more, with a stoyline and some better sound, and it'd be great. The end was funny.

Well ..

This was pretty good !
Nice fadein and fadeout of the sprites.
Music should NOT just cut-off like that after playing for 3 seconds. Use a FLASHKIT Mp3 loop or something.

Nice job on text bubbles.
Odd that the player's portrait appeared in one bubble-frame and no-where else.

Not much of a story, baddie against another baddie ..

It's a start. :)

David