Interesting...

Interesting story. It would of been better if you added some music or some more sounds. Also, the Japanese characters at the end don't mean "the end." You have to find the hiragana characters for [owari.]

WTF?

That was really fucking weird. I didn't get it at all. It was interesting tough, and I love weird Japanese(and psuedo Japanese shit), so I gave it a good score. But, dude, seriously, WTF?!

Not great, but not bad

This was a pretty interesting story. The effects were lacking, but I suppose that was what you were trying to do to make it seem more like a children's story (like a kid drew it or something). It's not what you see everyday in the flash relm, which is pretty refreshing! The story was good, so I give you a 7, good sir!

wow

to be honest I wasn't expecting anything like this, and that in itself had my interest. I enjoyed the interesting observation of Japanese children's books, and don't consider it any sort of racial jab at all. Only iffy thing for me was the lack of sound except for the page turn. I would have loved to have some music and sound effects with it. That really would have made my day. Otherwise it made it feel dull, when really it could have been so much more exciting with sound. Sweet drawings. ^_^

Dude....Awesome

Yeah, I was suprised about that children's book last year in Jap1 as you were. Awesome spoof.