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Recently just got Flash so this is my first flash i've taken time on...enjooy...working ons oem other stuff...

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CONGRATS

THAT WAS PRETTY GOOD FOR A FIRST!

The sum of the parts do not equal the whole

Even though I rated you fairly low on all of the categories, you get a 6 overall due to the fact that you manged to bring several mediocre (drawings) to bad (sounds) pieces together to create a fairly good whole. I was also very impressed that you have been taking the time to answer some of your reviews. An author who responds and reacts to feedback is the type of author I like to see.

Sincerely,
Goliath

AlterEgoZ777 responds:

thanks and the kind of reviewer like you giving good advice is the kind of reviewer i like to see...

Not bad at all

Not bad at all really. You could work on the graphics some tho. But good job!

AlterEgoZ777 responds:

thank you fine sir...with the help of kid on ng i was able to improve my graphics...go see for yourself at my new flash dont give people weapons

Cool

The first flash you have put alot work on? Well, it's very funny and good! Keep it up!

/Dirty Muffin

AlterEgoZ777 responds:

mmmmm..muffins...rock lee...isnt that from naruto?

neat little flash, an enjoyable view :-)

hehe, i like it! pretty neat first flash i must say... nice to see it fit in with the theme and spirit of christmas :-) this flash has nice duration and length, good stuff.. it's an appealing view, and most enjoyable.. i like the effort you put in your sound effects, they were great! i like your simple drawings too, they were sufficient looking, but most people didn't think so, like when the guy is sitting in the room with the fire place - that was well drawn, i think it's your style, but anyway... looking forward to see you develop as a flash author, just need a little work with the smoothness and flow of your animations and movements, need to incorporate some motion tweening and perhaps additional frames... it's a great comical storyline too hehe funny stuff haha, loved it all the way through// nice work, good job!

AlterEgoZ777 responds:

thanx...and yes i definetly need to learn bout motion tweens which ihad actually by the end of the movie...

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Dec 19, 2003
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