Well

Impressive work indeed this film was well done. The intro was strong and the theme was powerful. Also the music added the tence affects. The animation were well done and also the zoominh affects were great. This was a short movie with a solid intro like battle and great plot. The sea theme of ridges and monsters was a great idea.

Overall an intro like movie with impressive graphics and a strong them.

Not Bad

If you do finish this movie, PLEASE CHANGE YOUR THEE's TO THE's. THEY MAKE NO SENSE THE WAY YOU HAVE THEM. YOU CAN'T CHANGE A DETERMINANT INTO AN OBJECTIVE CASE PRONOUN. That's my two cents. Grammar/spelling errors drive me nuts when the submitted piece has less than twenty words total and no complex sentences. How hard can it be when the rest of the animation took hours to complete, to actually go back and proofread what you wrote? Simple simple. Thee=you (basically). You want to replace each THEE you wrote with THE. The reader has to make those stress and inflection decisions on their own.

Not bad.

That was pretty good. however don't be a lazy bum next time....

Great start...

Yeah it is indeed a great start. Graphics, style and music is great, and wonderful how you set the mood. I did acctaully miss some shadings in your pictures though.

It's defintly a good preview, but I'm not a big fan of pointless preludes and the "one man..."- thing is overused too.

Incrdible!

I don't really understand what this is supposed to be, but it's great! You can make a great game for this story! I really liked the way the text was designed.