Okay....

The story was pretty good. It was a nice movie. Especially for your first. Graphics were not good. Animation was bad too. You have potential. I didnt like it though. Nice try. Better luck next time!

-TheSquirrelyOne

ok the plot

2,000 dollars is a tiny amount for any mob to go kidnap some guys wife for. They would more likely cut off a finger or break his leg. But ok so they take his wife he needs to get the money to pay them off if he is so dirt poor why the hell has he got about 8,000 dollars or more worth of weapons in his house?? Hell 2,000 dollars aint hard to come up with if you have a house filled with guns. But thats just me

Decent Idea

Bad realization. Try again later when you've come to use flash to it full capacity. Keep working and try writing less dialog during the fight scenes. it jsut screws up the rush of battle when you try and put too many words in.

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You had this great, epic set up, and then theres this thing. The graphics werent that great, and it wasnt as involved as it could be

Sorry mate, bit too cheese ladden for me

The graphics were, well, sub-par is a positive way to say it. That'd would've been okay, cept your sound was whack. I mean, it made it funny, but the kind of funny that someone falling into an elevator shaft is. I wasn't laughing with you, lets just say that.

Oh, and you forgot the most important quote about love:

"Then it comes to be that the soothing light at the end of your tunnel, is just a freight train coming you way, yeah..."