Good first attempt

I was amused during the introduction of the team. I busted out laughing to see who was the enemy that Mr. T had to fight. However, then the plot slowed down and went nowhere. And while the ending was unexpected, it wasn't a very interesting ending. It was what they call anti-climatic. Also there were very noticeable spelling errors all over the dialogue. Overall, good first creative attempt though. Gotta start somewhere right?

Hmm

I'm rating this on my "first submision system" This was a decent flash, I especially like your blood effect. Most people just draw some light red lines.

The story was wierd, and I didn't like the fact at all that my hero died. The A-team theme song got annoying pretty quickly.

Overall it was, as I said, a decent flash. Not blam-worthy, but probally not staying in portal to long either. Just to rest in the archive, maybe be put in Mr. T collection. Good luck with future flash!

Ehh?

I didn't really expect to be good, I don't know this was just wierd. The improted pictures, graphics where somewhat quasi interesting though. It differed very much from other peoples first flashes, much longer and I'm glad you just didn't do a crappy stickfight.

The flash Itself was however very unclear. WTF was the goth chick doing?, were there a story?, and above all- what had this to with A-Team?!

Uhm...

Oooook.....Uhh, what the hell is this stuff man? It made no sence and it sucked....For a pro, but that you are not...So its ok. Since this is your first its really not that bad. Work on stuff that people acually like today....Unlike Ghostbusters, Mr.t, and Buffy. Its good for originality, but its bad to have crao like that....But you can get better man, dont let any of the crap people tell you make you stop. When begginers stop cause of shit reveiws it pisses me off. Not many people do awesone there first time, just keep at it man.

I was just watching the Evil Willow episodes...

A week or two ago the Buffy episodes with Dark Willow in 'em were being run on FX. Hilarious to see her face off not only against Mr. T and Murdoch but also the Ghostbusters... and all in front of a Welcome to Sunnydale sign. HIGH-larious, I tells ya.

But I DO have to agree with a lot of the other reviewers: WAYYYYYY TOO BIG, and all due to the music, no doubt. In your comments you say you already had to cut down on things to get it to fit on the portal. There's a reason the size limit is where it is, BTW, it's there for huge complex flashes that make good use of every kilobyte... not for uncompressed music. I really hope you can figure it out and remake it with super-low-size compressed mp3s for the Buffy and A-Team theme songs, perhaps.

Till then... while huge, the flash was funny and fairly original as far as A-Team flashes go, so good job on everything but the filesize there. #;-}>