not good

it's not good but smoking DOES kill!

not gd

not as good as the other moves

its kinda in the middele

Some parts are good but others arent as good...

Putting "The Entertainer" in there would be swell.

But w/e, fifened

SOUND

I know it was supposed to be a silent film, but a grainy soundloop in the background or even a cheesy piano track would've given it some character. Fair enough you tried, and I hope you do better in future offerings