annnndd...?
Try remaking this with better plot, voices and better animation. Could be interesting.. maybe.. well it`s worth a shot.. right?
I know this is your first animation, and I understand that figuring things out is one thing. But really if it`s just to test the features don`t host teh final product. Instead use it as a story board and set yourself a higher standard and go after something that`ll be impressive to show. This is a bas representative of your work.