The preview trailer for a series I ended up not making, because I got bored. Without the follow-up animations it doesn't make much sense, but it probably would if I'd finished it. It contains flashing lights and high-brow quotes, so don't watch it if you're epileptic, stupid or both.
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Nice work, I like the idea a lot. The only real problem I have is the repeated use of the same graphics and sounds. The main characters still stance with the flowing bandana is what I am talking about. The same drawing was used at least twice. Everything looked good, and even though you say you do not want to continue with this movie, I hope you continue with something. Good luck.
Ryan
Hey not bad but....
First the negatives
1. Sound, I dont mean to be anal but I thought the same sound of the sword clanging was really overused.
2. I dident think your storyline was totally clear.
3. Not a alot of action. If you wanted this to be an introduction to your series you really needed to TELL STORY and GIVE A SHOWOFF piece of action to your viewer that makes them wanna say WOW I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE
Now the Positives
1. I liked the music...it fitted very well to your text.
2. I really liked your text and quotes.
3. I thought your artwork was great but was not followed up on :(
4. You will only get better and I cant wait to see your future improvement.
KEEP IT UP
Your review I'll respond to, because it addresses a lot of issues. DOn't worry about being anal, I'm used to constructive criticism.
1. The only damn sword sound I could find after a long search. I'll try to locate more for next time.
2. I guess it is a little cryptic. It's mainly to pave the way for chapter two.
3. Duly noted. Action isn't my strong point, as I'm just starting out.
As for the positive notes, thank you very much. My second offering should appease everyone... hopefully.
A in Gay!
sucks plain simple, boring!!!
i liked it. it was pretty good
the art was graet
Nice
Good for a first submission. I like your style.