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Burn in hell !!!

too short

i'll give you a seven.. make it longer.. then everyone would like it.. good job dough..

I liked...

Too short, but really have potential. If you made it longer, you would be a top-fiver, that's for sure.

its also aight

dorky but i like it - kinda

neat

I liked your cheesey poetry, did you write it? The graphics were good, but I agree with the others, it needs to be longer.