Motion seemed a bit off like the FR was below standard. Needed to be sped up the old school mario does have its charm if animated correctly the music needed to be more diverse in this as well with no looping

Immortal what?

How about a taxonomic change? Maybe to "immortal enema?"

Very slow and assinine.

The tweening is extremely choppy, the frame rate is way too low, everything feels as if it's going in slow motion, and only a few frames of the animation routines from the sprites were used. Visuals do not a movie make, but when you're trying to recreate the look and feel of old school Mario, it's important to learn to tween properly and keep the pacing faster than what was presented here. The music was also repetitive and completely out of place. My real beef, however, is with the extremely poor storyline. It, along with the dialogue, feels completely random, as if the author just added things as he went along, without planning anyhthing out in advance. This is particularly evident by the abrupt ending. To be honest, it wasn't a very good concept to begin with.

dude

I like mario.. please just make a betetr story line. :D

My mind has turned to mush!

Korena_Love is right! That music has melted my brain!

A sound effort, but it didn't amount to much. I hope I didn't make a mistake by voting 2...